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Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Reading Notes: Sinbad Third Voyage, Part B
The second part of this story shows the plan and escape of Sinbad and his crew. I would like to put more emphasis on the plan and strategy of how to escape and maybe throw in something else that would bring more suspense to the story, maybe adding a little battle or traps set by the men that tricked some of the giants. Then when they landed on the other island, I want to use a different beast than a snake, something that brings more terror and haunts the crew and the readers. I think some more description can be used to tell of the giants and creatures instead of wasting time writing about waiting in the castle and being eaten by the giant. That has already happened once so I would like something new to happen.
Bibliography: Voyages of Sinbad, 3rd Voyage by Andrew Lang; link to reading
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